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Oh, what a lovely look at what was going on in Jack's head!
I especially liked this:
He’d died again on the Nox world, but Jack had died first that time, so he didn’t have to know. It wasn’t supposed to happen again. It was never supposed to happen again.
That is so Jack - Daniel died on him once in Abydos, and never again... yet that's what happened (or what he thought did). Yes.
Lovely work, Betty. Thanks for your enthusiasm for Gen Fic Day. :)
I especially liked this:
He’d died again on the Nox world, but Jack had died first that time, so he didn’t have to know. It wasn’t supposed to happen again. It was never supposed to happen again.
That is so Jack - Daniel died on him once in Abydos, and never again... yet that's what happened (or what he thought did). Yes.
Lovely work, Betty. Thanks for your enthusiasm for Gen Fic Day. :)